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Lily's avatar

This helped me realize the second chapter of my manuscript should be my first, and what was first should be fourth. So, thanks for that so much!

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James Yu's avatar

Love the idea of making each scene work on all three levels (character, plot, world) at once. Also, those short flashbacks are hard to master but really powerful. I'm noticing as I re-read Game of Thrones that this is how Martin starts so many of his chapters: one very engaging tactile moment, then flash back to all the travel that got the characters to where they are.

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